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April Tears

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Tonight I lie awake thinking of those better days when you were here
 when you were here, everyday you would be there looking at me with a smile on your face
And who knew That no one could save you? 
And who knew that you would slip away...

I must dreaming, because theres no way that this is reality, and if I am somebody pinch me cuz this is the worst thing that's ever happened to me, wake me up cuz I don't want to be stuck in this nightmare, are you out there? Please, please wake up...

Dressed in all black, I stand there looking at, the empty shell that I used to call friend
 Im walking away cuz I don't have any thing to say, cuz I'm still speechless 
 Im all choked up, my hearts running amok, cuz it can't take much more this...

I must dreaming, because theres no way that this is reality, and if I am somebody pinch me cuz this is the worst thing that's ever happened to me, wake me up cuz I don't want to be stuck in this nightmare, are you out there? Please, please wake up...

I can't stop, no i can't stop crying these April tears....
Because all of my worst fears were true how could this happen to you?
Why not me? I guess some things, r better left un answered
and I'm praying to god to please, please bring him back

I must dreaming, becuz theres no way that this is reality, and if I am somebody pinch me cuz this is the worst thing that's ever happened to me, wake me up cuz I don't want to be stuck in this nightmare, are you out there? Please, please wake up...

I must dreaming, becuz theres no way that this is reality, and if I am somebody pinch me cuz this is the worst thing that's ever happened to me, wake me up cuz I don't want to be stuck in this nightmare, are you out there? Please please, please please wake up...

Now I can't win a losing fight....And im fighting to stop myself from crying, but i can't, no I can't stop crying these
April tears
So what do you think? Have I gotten better? The second verse do you think it was strong enough? im not quite sure if it was could you please give me some feedback cuz I really want to improve =)
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ChristofLehmann's avatar
April . I cry tears, because you published before finishing your proof reading.

Here is one: ( Paragraph two )

"I must dreaming, because theres no way that"

Always glad to be helpful ;)