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Goodbye

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The world turned upside down and, as the walls fell down, you turned around…
Abandon what you know, and just let go. I'll be waiting for you…
Distress, Its overwhelming your brain, you can hardly stand…
Let alone contain it, detain it, your on your own, all alone…
I'm sitting here ready to fall…
I'm about to lose it all…
Your breaking, your shaking, you can't control…
Your nerves are on fire, could this be it?
It couldn't, it shouldn't!
But what if it is…
Sending out an SOS, because I can't handle this distress…
Don't take a second glance. I can't feel my hands…
The words I want to say, can't seem to find there way but wait to late and you'll be gone..
I'll save you, I'll save you
Just scream out all the pain
I'll be your alibi, call to me, speak to me, anything…
Just to let me know that your there…
Your like the sun I am like the moon…
And I can't spend another day without you.
I'm sitting on my own, feeling so alone
Can't take it, can't make it
You and me were meant to be, together…
Without you, I'm still lost…
And I sit here, wondering what if things ended differently?
Would you have ended up with me?
But as I fall asleep tonight, and I close my eyes,
All I here is your final goodbye, and all I know is that I'm the only one, alive.


There is no beginning just…

THE END
Song I wrote. It sounds really good when sang not so great when its written out, but its also a nice poem so yeah =) I'll put up a video of me singing it if I get into the film thingy here on DA might put it on youtube though :iconshrugplz:






Lyrics (c) me and if anybody steals them I will personally murder them :iconevilplz:
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art-acheiver-4eva's avatar
I can't really see this as a song but I think the words are brilliant. They portray a strong amount of emotion.
Your like the sun I am like the moon…
And I can't spend another day without you.
I love that line. The rhyme is great without sounding cliched and your choice of words adds to the mood.